June 06, 2004

His

words invite a vermillion kite of taleandthread that darts the edge
of a clearbluesky with ribbontrailsandcellograsps,
ticksandtrickles a wandering gift, an unannounced
hourglassed everykindoftime
lifts high above her hardbackchair and swallows the world in a single sigh
as if to say,
"we become everything we dream".

6 Comments:

Blogger in vino veritas [in wine, there is truth] said...

is the 'he' from 'His' and 'A positive complicity ' the same as the 'you' from 'So'?

11:42 p.m.  
Blogger name of the rose said...

I hadn't found this comment until today...

I am flattered that you have read me in this way...The he from His refers to my father and is definately not the you from So...As for the he from A Positive Complicity, a little mystery will remain...

...thanks for your comment...



Is the 'he' from 'His' and 'A positive complicity ' the same as the 'you' from 'So'?

11:02 a.m.  
Blogger name of the rose said...

...and my previous comment sounds like 'who's on first'.

7:08 p.m.  
Blogger name of the rose said...

...as does yours

12:51 a.m.  
Blogger in vino veritas [in wine, there is truth] said...

point well made.

thank you.

6:57 p.m.  
Blogger in vino veritas [in wine, there is truth] said...

... and, it's important to guard a little mystery; I agree.

6:58 p.m.  

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